Trapped.
I was slowly walking across a bright brown rocky road. I heard
a cracking sound coming from the ground. I looked behind me and saw a car
falling into the ground. I saw the crack slowly making its way to me. So I turned
and ran as fast as I could until all I saw was black.
I stood up from
the dusty cold ground and wondered where I was. And then I saw a bright light.
I ran as fast as I could towards the light hoping it was the way out. As soon
as I got there I regretted even trying to get out…
I liked how the character thought the bright light was good but then when the character got there it was bad.
ReplyDeleteMore please William - I am sitting here in suspense making up all sorts of ideas about what happened next.....
ReplyDeleteGood story. I liked how the bright light was not the way out, but something bad. Where did the car come from?
ReplyDeleteMarlon 6H, St Andrews Walkerville SA
Very well written 100 Word Chalenge. There were a few full stops missing at the beginning and one two many in the middle but other than that I very much enjoyed your use of adjectives and your storyline. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteGillian
Awesome writing! WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!?
ReplyDeleteGood Job William is that scary
ReplyDeleteHi William
ReplyDeleteLovely language - you have chosen lots of adjectives, powerful verbs and different sentence starters which makes your 100 word challenge a pleasure to read. I particularly like the last sentence which leaves us hanging on a cliff edge... I wonder what will happen next? Well done.
Mrs Fine 100 WC Team